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THE DAY I FALL IN LOVE
CHAPTER ONE SURWOLF
The cruse ship exploded Xenophilius Lovegood woke on the door he fell asleep on. Then he saw an island in near dissents, he swam towards it. When he reached the island he clasped form exhaustion. "How am I going to get home?" Xenophilius asked him self. He thought of Luna he cried him self to sleep on the beach.
The next mooring there was not a cloud in the sky. He was awoken by a sweet voice he flowed it thru the forest filled with wild flowers.
He saw a young lady wading in a the water he looked at the water fall. "Hello! Hello!" He called. She turned around. She has log brown hair and she is a cat girl. Her ice blue dress covered her feet. She turned around she looked at him and stared. She turned toward the waterfall and she ran. He ran after her. He lost sight of her he heard a scream. He flowed it and saw her laying on the ground her ankle caught in a jaw trap. "Don't move I am going to help you. My name is Xenophilius Lovegood." He said. She nodded her head. He took out his wand and said "Alohomora." The trap opened. "Now what is your name?" he asked.
"Jeackaba." She said. "My cruse ship exploded and I am the only survivor. You are the only person I saw. I thought I was going to die and then I herd your voice." He said. She sat up and looked at him. "I lost my wife three years ago and my eleven year old darter Luna is gone to boarding school. I don't like to be alone." Says Xenophilius. "I sorry." Jeackaba says. Jeackaba looked at him she touched his hand. "I take you to my village." She said. Getting on her knees and slowly getting up. Xenophilius watched her slowly getting to her feet. He was awestruck when he saw how small she was she come up to his knee. She fell to the ground. "I will carry you to your village, tell me where to go." says Xenophilius. Gently lifting Jeackaba in his arms. "You see smoke in sky?" asks Jeackaba. "Yes I do is that you village?" asks Xenophilius. "Yes." says Jeackaba. Xenophilius walked tours the smoke. "My people be scared by you." says Jeackaba. "Why will your people be frightened by me?" Xenophilius asks. "You tall. We never see someone like you. I tell them you come in peace." Jeackaba says.
When he walked in the village all the people looked similar to Jeackaba. They all looked at Xenophilius in fear. "This is Xenophilius he is peaceful he is not going to harm us." Jeackaba says. They ran back in there huts. "Where's your home?" Xenophilius asks. "That one." says Jeackaba pointing at a small hut.
Xenophilius walked up to it he opened the door. He bent down to get in he put her on the tinny cough he got some water. He took off his robe and ripped his shirt. He cleaned her wound and he bandaged it up. He knelt down next to her and held her hand.
"I like your hut." Xenophilius said. "Thank you Xeno." says Jeackaba. He gave her a little smile. "What wrong you sad?" asks Jeackaba. "I am just worried Jeackaba. I am worried about getting home." Xenophilius said. "I help you build boat. Can I go" says Jeackaba. "You want to come home with me?" asks Xenophilius. "Yes you want." says Jeackaba. "I would love if you came home with me. You need your sleep we will build a boat." says Xenophilius holding her hand. He watched her sleep. The sun came up. Jeackaba opened her eyes Xenophilius was still sleeping she walked out side and climbed up a tree like an acrobat. Xenophilius opened his eyes and he looked around the on room hut.
"Jeackaba? Where are you?" he called. "I out her Xeno." She called back. He walked out side he looked at the towering trees and all the colorful plants.
"LOOK OUT!" She called drooping a rainbow apple sized fruits.
"What are these?" Xenophilius asked. "Wobniar. It's plant." Jeackaba said. "Wobniar." Xenophilius repeated. Hanging up side down by her tail Xenophilius chuckled. "After breakfast are we going to work on our boat?" Xenophilius asked. "yes." She said touching his hand.
CHAPTER ONE SURWOLF
The cruse ship exploded Xenophilius Lovegood woke on the door he fell asleep on. Then he saw an island in near dissents, he swam towards it. When he reached the island he clasped form exhaustion. "How am I going to get home?" Xenophilius asked him self. He thought of Luna he cried him self to sleep on the beach.
The next mooring there was not a cloud in the sky. He was awoken by a sweet voice he flowed it thru the forest filled with wild flowers.
He saw a young lady wading in a the water he looked at the water fall. "Hello! Hello!" He called. She turned around. She has log brown hair and she is a cat girl. Her ice blue dress covered her feet. She turned around she looked at him and stared. She turned toward the waterfall and she ran. He ran after her. He lost sight of her he heard a scream. He flowed it and saw her laying on the ground her ankle caught in a jaw trap. "Don't move I am going to help you. My name is Xenophilius Lovegood." He said. She nodded her head. He took out his wand and said "Alohomora." The trap opened. "Now what is your name?" he asked.
"Jeackaba." She said. "My cruse ship exploded and I am the only survivor. You are the only person I saw. I thought I was going to die and then I herd your voice." He said. She sat up and looked at him. "I lost my wife three years ago and my eleven year old darter Luna is gone to boarding school. I don't like to be alone." Says Xenophilius. "I sorry." Jeackaba says. Jeackaba looked at him she touched his hand. "I take you to my village." She said. Getting on her knees and slowly getting up. Xenophilius watched her slowly getting to her feet. He was awestruck when he saw how small she was she come up to his knee. She fell to the ground. "I will carry you to your village, tell me where to go." says Xenophilius. Gently lifting Jeackaba in his arms. "You see smoke in sky?" asks Jeackaba. "Yes I do is that you village?" asks Xenophilius. "Yes." says Jeackaba. Xenophilius walked tours the smoke. "My people be scared by you." says Jeackaba. "Why will your people be frightened by me?" Xenophilius asks. "You tall. We never see someone like you. I tell them you come in peace." Jeackaba says.
When he walked in the village all the people looked similar to Jeackaba. They all looked at Xenophilius in fear. "This is Xenophilius he is peaceful he is not going to harm us." Jeackaba says. They ran back in there huts. "Where's your home?" Xenophilius asks. "That one." says Jeackaba pointing at a small hut.
Xenophilius walked up to it he opened the door. He bent down to get in he put her on the tinny cough he got some water. He took off his robe and ripped his shirt. He cleaned her wound and he bandaged it up. He knelt down next to her and held her hand.
"I like your hut." Xenophilius said. "Thank you Xeno." says Jeackaba. He gave her a little smile. "What wrong you sad?" asks Jeackaba. "I am just worried Jeackaba. I am worried about getting home." Xenophilius said. "I help you build boat. Can I go" says Jeackaba. "You want to come home with me?" asks Xenophilius. "Yes you want." says Jeackaba. "I would love if you came home with me. You need your sleep we will build a boat." says Xenophilius holding her hand. He watched her sleep. The sun came up. Jeackaba opened her eyes Xenophilius was still sleeping she walked out side and climbed up a tree like an acrobat. Xenophilius opened his eyes and he looked around the on room hut.
"Jeackaba? Where are you?" he called. "I out her Xeno." She called back. He walked out side he looked at the towering trees and all the colorful plants.
"LOOK OUT!" She called drooping a rainbow apple sized fruits.
"What are these?" Xenophilius asked. "Wobniar. It's plant." Jeackaba said. "Wobniar." Xenophilius repeated. Hanging up side down by her tail Xenophilius chuckled. "After breakfast are we going to work on our boat?" Xenophilius asked. "yes." She said touching his hand.
The Day I fall in love is a love story. Xenophilius Lovegood is the olney suvivor of a cruse ship expolshion. He swims to a near by Island he falls in love with a cat human hybrid named Jeckabua.
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Hey, I gotta say that I like the idea. There's no doubting that. However, if I could recommend anything, it's that you check up on your spelling and grammar. I'm not going to be a stickler about it, but remember to start a new paragraph every time a character begins their dialogue, and in terms of quoting what someone says, if it doesn't end with a question mark or an exclamation mark, end it with a comma instead of a period, and then say he/she said. Aside from that, just put a little more focus on detail. You've got something really good coming here, and to be honest, I'd like to read the next chapter when you've got it finished.
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